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Mon, Jun. 20th, 2005, 11:33 pm
malnpudl: First kiss (Gibbs/DiNozzo)

A little comment ficlet written for crimsonquills (with thanks to blueraccoon for letting me know it didn't totally suck), and as good an excuse as any for my first contribution here:

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It's Gibbs' mouth that gets to him. He can't keep his eyes off that mouth, those firm lips, the forbidding jaw that's so often clenched tight as Gibbs bites back words, bites back anger.

Tony wonders what else Gibbs bites. Bites back. He meant bites back.

He wonders what it would be like to be the person who could shake Gibbs' control and loosen those tight muscles, make Gibbs' jaw go lax and his lips go soft and welcoming.

It's Voss's fault. Ever since Tony kissed him... her… him… all he can think about is kissing Gibbs.

Tony never thinks about kissing men. He doesn't ever want to think about kissing any man, much less Gibbs.

Telling himself that doesn't help. Not at all.

"DiNozzo," Gibbs barks as he pushes away from his desk. "With me. Now."

"Boss?" Tony's hard pressed to keep up with him as Gibbs strides toward the elevator.

Gibbs says nothing, just stands there with his mouth shut tight and his back straight as they wait for the elevator.

Tony tries, but he can't keep himself from stealing sidelong glances at the tiny movements of the muscles in Gibbs' jaw. He isn't aware that he's flexing the fingers in his right hand, the hand closest to Gibbs.

"Boss?" he tries again as the elevator doors open.

Gibbs just steps inside and punches a button.

Tony follows.

They're between floors in the parking garage, Tony reckons, when Gibbs flips the switch to stop the elevator and turns to face Tony.

Tony's heard that some snakes mesmerize their prey with their eyes before they strike, immobilizing their victims. Now he believes it. Now he knows what the prey feels like.

Gibbs takes a step toward him, then another, then one more and he's in Tony's space, in Tony's face. "Got something on your mind lately, DiNozzo?"

Tony swallows hard. "Boss?" he says again, painfully aware that he's repeating himself.

Slowly, so slowly, Gibbs raises a hand and slides it behind Tony's head. "You've been asking for it," he says. "Now you're going to get it." And he leans into Tony and kisses him.

Tony hears the noises he's making, sounds of shock that quickly morph into surrender and hunger and desperation, and he thinks he should be embarrassed, but there's no room left in him for that. It's all crowded out by the incandescent pleasure of Gibbs' mouth, his lips every bit as soft and warm and welcoming as Tony had ever dared to dream.

Gibbs' hand is big and warm and gentle on the back of his neck. Gibbs' body is hard and hot and inviting and it spreads him, all willing, all eager, up against the wall.

It's Tony who first offers his tongue, and when Gibbs meets it with his own, Tony knows that this is what he's been waiting for all his life.

Tue, Jun. 21st, 2005 08:34 am (UTC)
webbgirl

Damn woman. That's the elevator scene I want to see now!

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 01:29 am (UTC)
malnpudl

Sorry to be so very slow replying! Thanks for the FB. I do love me some masterful Gibbs. *g*

Tue, Jun. 21st, 2005 05:54 pm (UTC)
neverbelonged

/drools/
I loved this. It was... /sighs/ great.
/drools more/
:) Great job!

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 01:30 am (UTC)
malnpudl

Thank you! (And my apologies for being so slow to reply to your comment.)

Wed, Jun. 22nd, 2005 01:49 am (UTC)
willingprey: I second the motion

Now THIS is a scene I want to see!!

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 01:30 am (UTC)
malnpudl: Re: I second the motion

Thank you! (And I'm sorry to have taken so long to reply to your lovely feedback.)

Wed, Jun. 22nd, 2005 05:35 am (UTC)
cpwatcher

>>Tony wonders what else Gibbs bites. Bites back. He meant bites back.

So do I? Tony offering is tongue is a step in the right direction.

Very nice. I like how Gibbs *knows* what Tony wants.


Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 01:31 am (UTC)
malnpudl

I'm so glad you chose that line; it was my favorite. *g*

Thanks for your lovely feedback, and I apologize for taking so long to reply to your comment.

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 12:56 am (UTC)
spikedluv

*wibble* Niiiiice. I like that. A lot. *bg*

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 01:32 am (UTC)
malnpudl

Thanks! *g* And thanks, too, for the rec. Makes me a very happy writer. :-)

And your icon is perfect for this little thing, isn't it? *g*

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 04:18 am (UTC)
sori1773

It's Tony who first offers his tongue, and when Gibbs meets it with his own, Tony knows that this is what he's been waiting for all his life.

*dies*

Guh. I love how you manage to effortlessly combine the hot with the tender. This. so. happened. *bg* Loved it!

(And seriously, I can't believe I almost missed this! *wibble* How did I miss this? Argh! I had to follow a rec from spikedluv!

Thu, Jun. 30th, 2005 05:31 am (UTC)
malnpudl

Thank you! You give the loveliest feedback! :-D

And I know what you mean; I miss a day or so on LJ and all kinds of cool stuff just slips past me that I don't find out about until later. I posted this one on my LJ a few days ago (a week ago? I dunno) along with a couple of SG-1 snippets, much shorter things. These little comment ficlets are really fun to write, very low stress.

Mon, Jul. 4th, 2005 04:13 pm (UTC)
audrarose

oh, yummy, yummy, yummy! This is just so perfectly them - I loved it!

Thu, Nov. 24th, 2005 01:37 pm (UTC)
twoweevils

I just stumbled across this today. I don't know where my head was back in June. Anyway, it rocks. Hot, sensual, UST-y, and then the big payoff. *melt*

Just lovely!

M.

Tue, Aug. 26th, 2008 07:44 pm (UTC)
tucker_liz

Sorry I'm late to the party, but this was just recommended to me yesterday. Very nice...

Sun, Oct. 5th, 2008 06:09 am (UTC)
miss_academia

Oh, how lovely. Sweet and hot and wonderful.